Forum Post #4

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The Good

The example I have chosen for a "good" example is Figure 11-5, "Paul's Last Days." I like this photostory because it has a large leading photo and the photos flow together. The white space is also pushed to the sides and the space in between the photos seem to be similar. It looks like all of the photos of context underneath the photo, except for the bottom right photo.

It also states that this is the second page, so there are probably enough photos to portray the story. I think this is a great representation for a photostory.


The Bad

The example I have chosen for a "bad" example is Figure 11-10, "Blood, Sweat, and Gears." I dislike this photostory because there is no obvious lead photo. I also feel that there is a lot of white space spread throughout the photo, and not just pushed to the edges.

There is also no context for each of the photos so the readers don't understand the underlying meaning of the photos. Overall, it's not a bad photo story, the space between the photos are similar, but there is a lot to do to make it better. 

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